fredag 3 februari 2012

Creative connector

once i saw in the tv that it had been a explosion in the real world. And once some guys started fire in my old school. I have seen many movie that one of the child is the child that the parents dosen´t. It have been many people that is in gangs in the real world. Its really many people that the parents dosen´t like the older son than the perfect dauther. Its many people in the real world that is good to start fire on things.

1 kommentar:

  1. Good content but check your language more carefully! Start sentences with capital letters. Write !I! with a capital letter.

    NB
    ---an explosion---
    --many movies where one of the children---the parents don't like. Many people are in gangs.
    There are really many families where the parents don't like the older son but only the perfect daughter.
    There are many people---that are good at starting fires.

    SvaraRadera