fredag 13 januari 2012

Goldilock

once upon of time there was a hungry girl in the woods. YHere she could see a house. She went into it and saw some honing. She tasted the father beers but it was to hot. And then she tasted the mothers but it was to cold. When she tasted the baby beers honing it tasted really good. Just like it should. So she eat up everything . After that she went to bed. She tried the fathers bed but it was to big. And then she went to the mother bee bed but it was to soft. When she tried the the baby beers bed did she like the bed. She started to sleep. After a cupel of hour the family came back and saw that the gir had eat up baby beers honing. and When they went to the bed so did the girl wake up. She got scared so she ran out oft the house and never came back.

1 kommentar:

  1. A good summary of the story but you have changed one thing; she ate porridge not honey!

    Check you language more carefully!

    NB
    Once upon a time----
    --honey/porridge--
    ---father bear's but it was too hot---
    ------she ate up---
    ---a couple of hours---
    ---she liked the bed---
    --the girl had eaten baby bear's honey/porridge---
    ---the girl woke up---

    SvaraRadera